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Author Topic: Civilian (Pirate) // Kedi  (Read 1804 times)

Pixie

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Civilian (Pirate) // Kedi
« on: January 07, 2014, 01:54:23 PM »
It's cold outside, so have a one-eyed pirate Mau to warm you up! XD

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Re: Civilian (Pirate) // Kedi
« Reply #1 on: January 07, 2014, 07:31:07 PM »
Thank you for the submission Pixie!  We'll be giving you the review a week from now. 

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Re: Civilian (Pirate) // Kedi [ACCEPT]
« Reply #2 on: January 14, 2014, 06:43:47 PM »
Here kitty, kitty, kitty >:3

Reviewers universally really loved Kedi!  In general, reviewers responded very well to how he fully embraces being a Mau - how he is written more like a bullish cat who happens to sometimes be a person rather than a person with cat-like qualities.  Not only that, but he is Grumpy Cat and an unrepentant tom and generally a balls-to-the-wall guy.  He is very well suited to the pirate's life. 

The reviewers had two particular questions for expansion:

1) Can we learn a little more about Kedi's formative years?  Reviewers wanted to know more about how he got into his life of crime, like why he wanted to run with the wrong crowd in the first place.  Also, what kind of scams does he run nowadays? 

2) Some reviewers wondered if Kedi had enough plot hooks, as some reviewers weren't sure if he had enough reason or motivation to interact with other characters besides other pirates.  I think addressing the question of his youth and his current running scams can help answer this, plus if you want to share with us here or in the Plots thread what kind of trouble you think he'd get into, we should be fine.   


Overall, Kedi is a Fully Accept, because the points for expansion were not considered critical enough to block.  If you could address those questions, everyone would be all the more enlightened about the mysterious ways of Kedi.  Yay! 


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I love his dedication to the thug ideal, tempered by the fact that he has a brain in his head and knows how to pick his fights.  I love his hilariously feline attitude towards things, and I would love to see how he deals with being on the same ship as Bork on a daily basis.

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I cannot say enough how Kedi is a beautifully realized example of what a cat that can poof into a human could be, and hes going to be a fabulous character to toss characters against (even when there isnt catnip around), this tomcat who sometimes deigns to walk as human. 

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It seems highly fitting that the ship's cat on a spaceship would be a feline alien.


Questions for Clarification

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I'm curious as to what caused Kedi to start down the path of crookedness.  There's mention that he fell in with a gang of bad kitties, but is there anything in particular that caused him to want to start running with a bad crowd?

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I do think a little more on Kedi's formative years might be enlightening. 

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I would really like to hear about whether he has a record.

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What sort of arc does Pixie want to use to evolve him within the game? Right now he is all cat, and I love that to pieces, but it is hard to see if hes going to stay that aloof tomcat or if hes going to actively get himself involved in things.


Non-critical Questions/Thoughts

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What is his birth name, anyway?

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If another Mau was in trouble (one who didn't know of him), would it bother him enough to act?  Would it depend on circumstances?

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Does Kedi have any living family?

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I'm curious what Kedi thinks about the plight of the Senshi-- does he emphasize with them, since he himself is an outlaw? Is he grumpy about getting dragged into the fight, or does he care less and just go with it?

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Does he have a favorite strain of catnip? Is catnip like pot (lots of types, but you get what your dealer gives you)?